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Story Sharing Week: Unexpected Adventures, Part 1

27/6/2017

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Zach’s Imagination
by Zachary Wong
 
Hi, my name is Zach. Today I’m going to tell you about my imagination. One bad, bad, bad day I vanished to a big, bubbly river. When I started to drown to my death, I vanished again.
     “What the hey!”
    I reappeared in the Forest of Dreams and I was stuck in a branch. Then I heard thump! thump! thump!
     It was a big T-Rex!
     “Arrrghhhhh!”
     In all the chaos, I vanished again.
     “Why does this have to keep on happening?”
     I kept on disappearing and reappearing, it was getting really annoying. Now I was where the rocky stepping stones were at the Bubble River. I went to jump onto the first stone but I failed - I slipped and fell into the Bubble River.
     Then when I was underwater, I saw something glowing. When I went closer to it, I saw that it was a portal. I swam up, I touched it, BOOM! I teleported again.
     “This is the worst day of my life!”
     But at least I was finally back home. For now. Phew.


Lost in the Desert

by Isaac Woon
 
It was really hot when I woke up. I was in a dark sandstone cave in the desert! I felt scared. I was alone in burning desert.
     In the distance, I could see a few granite mountains and some obsidian mountains. There was a rainbow mountain in the middle of the other mountains. I wanted to go, because it looked safe.
     Luckily, I was wearing high tech shoes, t-shirt and shorts with super light, super cooling-warming system for whatever situation I was in. I also had a new travel backpack. In it was an invisible headphones, with a water shooter that shot water in my mouth whenever I was thirsty. There was also some dry food, a mini cooler bag with lots of fruits in it, a jumper, some long pants and a tiny bed with shelter that can grow to its normal size.
     I put on some shoes that can make you run very very fast. I found them in my jumper pocket. I ran towards the mountain. On my iPhone, I installed a special app called Survival GPS. It said that the mountain was like ONE TRILLION KILOMETRES AWAY!!!
     “This is going to be a very long trip,” I told myself.
     Suddenly there was a loud bang. I checked my backpack for a quick snack, an energy bar and a peach. When I opened my backpack I saw a fluffy talking bunny eating my dumplings! I was so surprised that I jumped three metres into the air!
     I asked the bunny was he was doing. He said he was starving and he was tired, and then he galloped away.
     I started running again. Suddenly the mountain disappeared out of my view and appeared right behind me. I changed my running shoes into super light shoes and I put on a jet pack that I found under a rock. It was dirty so I cleaned it with my jumper then I flew up the mountain.
     After what felt like three thousand days and three thousand nights, I reached the top. I climbed through a trapdoor and fell through a portal. There was a colourful light and I touched it.
     Then I woke up. It was just a dream! I was relieved that it wasn’t real.


The Teacher in the Snow

By Elise Pitts
 
One day there was a teacher named Elise who went to the snow. When she got there, she climbed up the mountain. She made a snowman and then thought to herself, “I made a boy, how about I make a girl?” So she made a snow girl.
     She loved the view of the mountain, then she fell going too close to the edge and broke her leg. She went to the hospital, she had an x-ray and she had fractured her leg, so at least it wasn’t broken.
     She was in pain and she was crying. The next day she went home from the hospital and went to sleep straight away. She had a party on that night, but she was in a wheelchair and couldn’t go.
     She had to tell Mia, her friend, “I can’t go to your party.”
     Upset, she went to the park to clear her head and feel better.
     Three years later, she was much better. She was so happy that she could do more and go to more parties - yay yay yay! She did go back to the mountain because she still loved the snow, but she was very careful not to go too close to the edge.
 
 
Ruby and Ben
By Mia Kappadath

 
Once there lived a robot. But this robot was very lonely. Her name was Ruby. She had no friends.        One sunny evening Ruby went to the park to try to get some friends and at the park she saw a … VERY HANDSOME ROBOT! She really wanted to introduce herself but Ruby hadn’t had a bath for weeks. So she quickly went back home and took a lovely shower hoping that the robot was still at the park.
     After the lovely shower she thought, ‘Hmmm I’m not that pretty right now’. So she went to her beautiful flower garden and picked some marigolds and put them in her hair. Ruby quickly drove back to the park. Just as Ruby saw the handsome robot he came closer and said ... ‘Hello, my name is Ben.' 
     ‘Aghh my name is Ruby,’ she replied.
     They talked for an hour and soon they became good friends.

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28/11/2017 04:45:35 pm

Really nice way to express the imagination. Thank you for putting it into words for us. Keep on doing so!

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