Mick and the Bomb

by Kaden, Year 3
Once upon a time there was a dumb kid called Mick. He was dumb because he didn't know 1+1, never knew what he was supposed to do and had dumb ideas. One day, he was in detention because he didn't know what to do in class time. There was a robber outside the window, who was holding a BOMB!!! He threw it at Mick and the bomb went:
5...
     4...
          3...
               2...
                    1...
                          Kkkkkaaaaabbbbbbboooooommmmm!!!
Mick's bottom caught on fire but he didn't realise until he saw the detention teacher jump onto the floor and scream 'MICK!!!YOUR BOTTOM IS ON FIRE!!!' Mick screamed so loudly it almost took down the whole school. Mick ran around, trying to get away from his bum, until he got an idea, but it was USELESS because the idea was waiting for it to rain. So he got outside (with his bottom on fire) and waited. His bottom really hurt because it had been burning for 1h 25m and 59sec. After a second, it started raining. The bottom stopped burning. But then TV commentators showed up and Mick became a famous millionaire. The next day, he showed-off at school and everyone was jealous.

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