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Twinkle

24/2/2016

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By Bianca, Year 3
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Once there was a fairy whose name was Twinkle. Every morning she went to the fireflies and fed them till they were full. Her friend Janet was jealous of her because Twinkle got to feed the fireflies and Janet didn't. Janet was so jealous that the next day when Twinkle started feeding the fireflies Janet popped up and said, “Can I have a turn?”
“Yes,” said Twinkle. But Janet just snatched the food and ran away with it. Twinkle felt bad.

Twinkle started to think. She thought: should I run away in the opposite direction or should l go and try to find out were Janet went? She thought about lots of things. Even about how Janet felt. So she decided to run away from the fairy village too but in the opposite direction. She went to the forest but she took the fireflies with her. The forest was big and dark inside. Twinkle decided to take a nap till the morning.

When she woke up Janet was in front of Twinkle waiting for Twinkle to wake up. When she was awake, Janet said, “Do you want to run a race?”
“Yes,” said Twinkle. Then they ran a race. It had 12 laps of flying around a tree and 1 lap of karting around the tree. They ran the race. Twinkle was winning, then Janet, then Twinkle fell down but…Wow! She actually had the tip of her finger over the line! Janet exclaimed, “Ok, you win! You can go and have the food. It is inside the tree.” So they fed the fireflies and then went back to the fairy village and lived happily ever after.


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