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Bee Sting

1/12/2014

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By Morgan, Year 3
There was a man called Ron Dickson. He worked at a shop called Tattslotto. Today he was wearing shorts and a t-shirt. He was going to work on a hot day. It was twenty seven degrees to thirty four degrees. When he arrived at his shop, he opened the window. Four minutes later some customers lined up. While he was serving a customer, a bee flew into the shop. How? The window was opened. Did you know that Ron was cursed? The curse was that any nearby bee will go and try to sting him. Ron screamed ‘Ah!’ Then all the customers ran away. Ron ran out of the shop. The bee followed. Soon the bee caught up and stung Ron. It stung his arm. Ron said ‘what the f. (f word).’ Then Ron died because its (stinger) was hot and it felt like an adult eating your brain.     


   

 


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