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Story Sharing Week: Space

24/6/2017

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Space Shipping
By Ava Paterson
 
21st July, 1976
We’ve been stuck on this weird planet for days. I went to this planet to investigate the weird creature. Linda, Lalya and I were all ready to land. Then boom, clash and crash - we landed our ship but were soo close to exploding. We crashed, half of us were alive, half terrified and exhausted.
     We’ve walked not that far away from our ship. We’ve made a little camp with the remains of our ship. Linda stayed at the camp, and Layla came with me. We were looking for the space place. It had lots of buttons for communication.
     Layla suddenly started running back to to Linda.
      She yelled, “Stay there!”
      So I stayed, and about five minutes later, Layla ran back with Linda. Linda said something was following her when she went to get more parts from the spaceship.
      Suddenly, it came. The one we called ET. It was a robot dog and it had lots of mechanical fails. It started to chase us, everyone was screaming.
     We were nearly at the space station, when i tripped in a big hole. ET was right on me. Suddenly the ground started to shake. I was in the air - I must have fallen in a big air pipe. It suddenly stopped.
     Layla then came up a different air pipe and was next to me. Linda then jumped on to the roof of the space station. She then yelled, “Come on!”
     We both jumped and landed in the station. Linda jumped down and screamed, ET was right there!
     It came closer and asked, “Do you like home? Way home number phone?”
     I gave him my phone number, then suddenly, Linda, Layla and I were at my mum’s work… with ET.
 
10 Days Later…
 
31st July 1976
Now ET lives with me at my mum’s work, in the air vents. We eat white chocolate. Layla, Linda and I visit ET everyday. But one thing never changes, my phone number.
 
 
Spaceship
By Caitlin Arcena
 
I’ve been stuck on this planet for six months. I crashed here on a mission to find a new planet to live on. I didn’t go alone. I went with Commander Lightning and Chief Buzz.
     Our spaceship ran out of gas, making it crash into the nearest planet to it. The impact caused it to smash into a million pieces, so I’m stuck here. My co-workers and I have walked many kilometres since the crash.
     When we were on the ship, this place had electromagnetic fields in places. That’s what I’m looking for, electromagnetic areas to call the agency for a rescue craft.
     I’ve always felt that someone was watching me, and I was correct. Terrified of the giant snake monster, I turned around and ran with the Commander and Chief. As I watched the monster, I tripped on the snake’s tail.
     I tried to get up but I couldn’t. Out of the snake’s mouth was my boss, Donny Donanto. The snake was actually the rescue craft, the ETR, an Extra Terrestrial Rescuer. They found out that we crashed and came searching for us.
     Finally, I made my way back to Earth.
 

Spaceship Disaster
By Charlotte Paterson
 
I have been stuck on this planet for one second and I am suffering. I went to this planet to see what it is like to be on another plant.
     I was with my three best friends, Bob, Oscar and Bobo. They all were pretty, especially Oscar. My spaceship got out of control and crash. I have walked about a metre since I was on my ship and I can still see our awesome spaceship.
     I am looking for a mysterious monster. Two seconds later, I realised something was following me. It had one fang, one eye, two crocodile teeth and one big fat slimy and squishy body. I twas the crocofangeye.
     I tripped and fell. I tried getting up but I couldn’t and the monster picked me up and said; “Where’s Sammie Sprinkler?”
     “It’s ooonnn Eeearth,” I said, frightened.
     He dropped me and an off to Sammie Sprinkler. I ran off and never went back to the moon again.
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